DB+Essay+3,+Team+2

I am joining Team 2. Stephanie Thigpen

I am also joining Team 2 Shawn Mosher

Shawn here is the edited version with my comments and edits. I am also joining Team 2 Cindy Bullock

Looks like one more can join this group...Dr. Mills

I will also like to join Team 2. Alicia Lopez Alicia, my review of your essay is complete. I used red font to add my suggestions and questions. I hope this helps! Dawn Nummer I would like to join team two it looks awesome, here is my essay Nicholas Alarcon hi nicholas, my name is aishat and i will be reviewing your essay. here is my revision of your essay: goodluck!

here is my cartoon aishat alimi

Dr. Mills, I am going to go ahead and join this group because I am all alone in team 3. If you would like me to do something else instead, let me know. Thanks, why don't you come back to team 3. i don't want to be all alone in team three and team two looks full. aishat alimi Dawn Nummer Okay, Dr. Mills

Thanks for participating! Dr. Mills